This week and last week we had to write a narrative. I chose to write one about a character I made up called Savanna. My story is about when Savanna went to school and none of her friends were there, she went looking for her friends but couldn’t find them. When the school bell rang to start the day her teacher Mr Hoola told her to go to the school car park. But on the way she ran to her old teacher Mrs Hoop. Mrs Hoop spoiled the surprise: her friends are on holiday without her. Not long after she finds the actual surprise.
Do you have any fed back for me? Have you ever wrote a narrative before?